Your review was spot on!... I was very hesitant to write my story fictionalized. The agent I used told me to write it as womens fiction and to start more with Dinah's past to make the reader want to root for her. I had originally started it at the meeting we Emily. So I get the plot issues. I AM so very happy with your words, reviewing relating and getting the intent of my writing. Thank you so much for taking time to do this. Blessings dear one, Di
Oh and the title is misspelled DIANA with an A never Diane...lol
Thank you! I don't know why I, but I tend to default to Diane instead of Diana. Had to fix that a few times as I was writing the review.
Pacing is a tricky thing to get down, and I definitely think as the story went on it got much better. I think that it does probably work better starting with Dinah's character and going over her past. But all at the beginning it felt like maybe too much. Not sure what I'd have done differently if I were in your shoes though, so kudos regardless!
Your review was spot on!... I was very hesitant to write my story fictionalized. The agent I used told me to write it as womens fiction and to start more with Dinah's past to make the reader want to root for her. I had originally started it at the meeting we Emily. So I get the plot issues. I AM so very happy with your words, reviewing relating and getting the intent of my writing. Thank you so much for taking time to do this. Blessings dear one, Di
Oh and the title is misspelled DIANA with an A never Diane...lol
Thank you! I don't know why I, but I tend to default to Diane instead of Diana. Had to fix that a few times as I was writing the review.
Pacing is a tricky thing to get down, and I definitely think as the story went on it got much better. I think that it does probably work better starting with Dinah's character and going over her past. But all at the beginning it felt like maybe too much. Not sure what I'd have done differently if I were in your shoes though, so kudos regardless!